Grey Squirrel - Haiku & Contemporary Haiga

Thursday, 8 May 2014

hot crowded bus...

I focus my mind

on a cool breeze

Out of Sight L said...: that should do crossed air is really refreshing unless of course people close the windows; 8 May 2014 at 14:49
Bill said...: Just playing with this

crowded bus
a cool breeze drifting through
my mind

A moment I can relate to.; 8 May 2014 at 20:53
Frank... said...: Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Lorraine...; 8 May 2014 at 23:00
Frank... said...: Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Bill...; 8 May 2014 at 23:00
Nick said...: An interesting piece of work (to me, in my current place and circumstances) - a life I left behind a long time ago (and don't miss). Thanks - I think - for reminding me of it.; 10 May 2014 at 18:40
Frank... said...: Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Nick...; 10 May 2014 at 21:25
Magyar said...: sweeter air
as this door opens
bus stop

Clever Frank. _m; 15 May 2014 at 15:46
Frank... said...: Thanks for dropping by and leaving your haiku...; 17 May 2014 at 17:36
Adelaide said...: rear of the bus
not enough room
for a paper fan

Adelaide; 19 May 2014 at 03:35
Frank... said...: Thanks for dropping by and leaving your haiku. Adelaide...; 19 May 2014 at 12:05